Broad Outline of Final Narrative

Having considered the points raised in discussion and following further development, this flowchart represents a broad outline of our final narrative. 

Blood drips

Fade – organ playing/church bells

Girl with flowers /photo/crucifix

Lights the candle

Flashback

Party – she leaves

Man hanging round drunk

Follows her

Present day

Blesses the flowers/crucifix

Flashback

Assaults her

Present day

Leaves the church heading for the graveyard

Flashback

Dad walks in from work

Shes sat on stairs shaking etc

Kills dad

Present day

Lays flowers/crucifix down on grave 

This stage will enable us to construct our storyboard for the final film as it has clear narrative steps for us to follow.